Skeletons In The Closet- Page 1

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Adam's Comments:
Martin's internet is still out, so for the foreseeable future, I'm going to be the only author commenting on these pages. I know we've got a silent bunch of readers so now would be a good time to speak up. I'm so lonely....

This page came out particularly good. ^^ A bit of a change for us, but think it really cements the coming of the new story arc and the scenery didn't turn out half bad. Helped along is that Martin storyboarded the first panel for me to get a good idea of what it would look like.

The only problem is that I think I got the second panel wrong. Looking at the script again, I think it was meant to be a row of lockers, each marked with a sign saying either "Loving" or "Fearing" on them, like the students are marked for an attack. I sorta wound up with this instead... Maybe this is what was in mind, since Martin didn't tell me otherwise. Still, I do find it pretty embarrassing when I go pretty far from the script.

This is Dorothy's high school, it's just that I forgot the name it already had (... Keystone? Keysomething?) and so I wound up naming it after President Carter. Seemed right since he was a Georgia native. Martin corrected me on it, but he liked the new name better so it stuck. ^^

Martin's Comments:
On my 3DS so gonna gist this. Pretty happy with this one - liked scripting it, and while some things weren't exactly as planned I think Adam did a great job.

Should mention this is probably the most intense chapter so far, and Alex's situation will be sort of coming to a head in the pages to come.