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Stars On The Water: Page 9

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Adam's Comments:
Oh. Great. I just make a speech about how I thought the art got better from here on out and we come to this.

It uh... Took some time before I learned how to draw in side-profile, hence why Alex looks so weird in the third panel. But that's nothing compared to that weird tendril, which is supposed to be a pillar of water slapping him across the face. Martin's colors fortunately took the edge off that.

Speaking of, Gaspeed's speech bubble and that little mini-panel weren't going to be in it originally, but I was just too crappy an artist to convey that Alex was faking Gaspeed out without it.

Martin's Comments:
Yeah, originall was going to try and totally keep out showing people's thoughts in WaR, though it's not too big of a loss having to do it here.

Not a whole lot else to say about this page, though. Not one of my favorites and there's not a whole lot going on, but it gets its job done well enough. Might as well make a note, though, that graffiti is something to keep an eye on from here. One page that will be up in a few weeks in particular has a few things worth watching for on the walls.
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SHarles25's avatar
mystical mist?
I will wait next page to see that ;)