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The Black Flame- Page 10

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Martin's Comments:
Yeah, action pages don't give me a whole lot to say. Still, like how this one came out. Kip-up is always neat - always thought when younger it was called a kick-up, which makes more sense anyway.

Given the events of the chapter John can be taken to be texting for back-up, but I like to more think that he's stopping to take pictures.

Adam's Comments:
Huh. It's called a Kip-up? I didn't even think it had a name.

Still, I like how it really looks like Ivy is rolling in the first panel. I was worried it'd come across more like her arms are fire-proof.

I always got the impression John was texting myself. ^^ Was thinking about doing a joke-page of what he was saying but never got around to it.
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