When It's Wright: Page 14

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Adam's Comments:
Ughhhh.... Second panel is crap. The graffitti is the only thing I think came out good, but the rest seems so terrible. The so-obviously-typed lettering on the AME gang in particular draws attention to itself.

I did like the idea of the page though, that Alex is riding around letting the body-swap sink in. And I like the third panel, with him watching the gang but not being able to stop it. We get another, marginally-better Bus scene in about seven pages, though. So there's that.

Martin's Comments:
People can ask all the questions they want about "Blue Blood" or this "Mother O'Hara" person, but I think the real mystery here is the question of what one is supposed to do with the police exactly.

Anyway, I can recall Adam came up with the idea for where to take this page. I remember I wanted something with a scene on the bus and he pitched an idea on the specifics. As said, we'll be getting another bus scene soon.