Raynefall- Page 8

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Adam's Comments:
After all taht chatting on the last page, got jack to say about this one. Glad Dorothy's not shiftin around on her bed again, in a totally different pose each panel. Sadly this is gonna be the last page in a while where I get to go really creative. Ah, well. Had a lot of fun with all those different scenes. ^^

Actually feel bad that after all those creative scenes and backgrounds I phoned it in for this one. The window behind Power is nice, but could've done more with the movie thing in the first panel. Like have it zoomed out a bit so we can see a boommike and stage-hands and stuff conducting the interview. Be something.

Martin's Comments:
Internet issues account for me being late to comment on this, but gotten to it now. This page marks the end of Alex and Power's roles in this chapter, but only halfway done - good bit left to go.

Yeah, this is really sort of a pair of chapters kind of sandwiched together, but they do relate. The second half moreso sets up for chapter five, though.