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Adam's Comments:
Ugh.... Don't have much to say on fight scenes. Is something about Alex in this chapter I'll have to get to later, and enjoy drawing lightning effects on Five's gloves.

I imagine John's skin being naturally fire-proof probably gives him a slight resistence to a lightning bolt hitting his heart, doesn't it? ^^ Wonder what Ivy's excuse was. She got hit right in the face and her hair wasn't even singed.

Martin's Comments:
I think with Ivy in scripting it I was picturing more of a concussive blast. And to be fair, it did put her out of the fight for a bit.

Still, kind of funny that John got burned by it but Ivy didn't. Speaking of, he looks better beaten up. Might have to have that happen to him a good bit - the eye does add a certain something to his appearance.

Storm it should probably be noted is John's nickname of choice for Alex, due to one of a few aliases Alex has picked up over the years as the Storm Over Atlanta. There are T-shirts.
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