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Martin's Comments:
And so Alex has it figured out what his foe, or foes rather, are up to. Also we get a neat little flashback.
Not too much to say on this otherwise, but something worth calling attention to that I didn't see pointed out - besides the jumping around in movement and the like, another key sign is that the two have different eye colors. Kind of a small thing but worth bringing up.
Adam's Comments:
The script for the second panel as that Alex realizes that the Masked man he's fighting now is much taller than the one from just a moment ago (his crawling around low to the ground was disguising that). I wasn't sure how to really show that off and eventually wound up with that Flashback bit showing they other masked man was Dorothy's height.
I do like how Martin thought up some ways to keep them separate like that, the posture thing in particular.
Martin's Comments:
And so Alex has it figured out what his foe, or foes rather, are up to. Also we get a neat little flashback.
Not too much to say on this otherwise, but something worth calling attention to that I didn't see pointed out - besides the jumping around in movement and the like, another key sign is that the two have different eye colors. Kind of a small thing but worth bringing up.
Adam's Comments:
The script for the second panel as that Alex realizes that the Masked man he's fighting now is much taller than the one from just a moment ago (his crawling around low to the ground was disguising that). I wasn't sure how to really show that off and eventually wound up with that Flashback bit showing they other masked man was Dorothy's height.
I do like how Martin thought up some ways to keep them separate like that, the posture thing in particular.
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